[freehaven-cvs] last patches for now. sleeping shortly.

[arma@seul.org (Roger Dingledine)]

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last patches for now. sleeping shortly.


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--- usability.tex	1 Nov 2004 11:03:29 -0000	1.10
+++ usability.tex	1 Nov 2004 11:14:39 -0000	1.11
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 Other chapters in this book have talked about how usability impacts
 security. One class of security software is anonymizing networks --
-overlay networks on the Internet that let their users transact (for
+overlay networks on the Internet that let users transact (for
 example, fetch a web page or send an email) without revealing their
 communication partners.
 
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@
 an attacker might sign up many users to artificially inflate the apparent
 size of the network. Not only does this \emph{Sybil attack} increase the
 odds that the attacker will be able to successfully compromise a given
-user transaction,\cite{sybil}, but it might also trick
+user transaction \cite{sybil}, but it might also trick
 users into thinking a given network is safer than it actually is.
 
 And finally, as we saw in the above discussion about JAP, it's hard to

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