[tor-commits] r24675: {projects} Fix more minor issues ?\226?\128?\156password-protected?\226 (projects/articles/browser-privacy)

[Robert Ransom <rransom.8774@xxxxxxxxx>]

Author: rransom
Date: 2011-04-26 15:04:37 +0000 (Tue, 26 Apr 2011)
New Revision: 24675

Modified:
   projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex
Log:
Fix more minor issues

?\226?\128?\156password-protected?\226?\128?\157 implies ?\226?\128?\156encrypted?\226?\128?\157 these days, to anyone who has any
business using the word ?\226?\128?\156privacy?\226?\128?\157.

Modified: projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex
===================================================================
--- projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex	2011-04-26 15:03:58 UTC (rev 24674)
+++ projects/articles/browser-privacy/W3CIdentity.tex	2011-04-26 15:04:37 UTC (rev 24675)
@@ -332,8 +332,8 @@
 choice of Firefox Persona\cite{firefox-personas}), or it can be a text area
 with the user's current favored pseudonym. This idea of identity should then
 be integrated with the browsing experience. Users should be able to click a
-button to get a clean slate for a new identity, and should be able to log in
-and out of of password-protected stored encrypted identities, which would
+button to get a clean slate for a new identity, and should be able to log into
+and out of password-protected stored identities, which would
 contain the entire state of the browser. This is the direction the Tor Project
 intends to head in with the Tor Browser Bundle\cite{not-to-toggle}.
 

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