[or-cvs] r12125: re-polish index page (website/trunk/en)

[arma@xxxxxxxx]

Author: arma
Date: 2007-10-22 21:34:52 -0400 (Mon, 22 Oct 2007)
New Revision: 12125

Modified:
   website/trunk/en/documentation.wml
   website/trunk/en/index.wml
Log:
re-polish index page


Modified: website/trunk/en/documentation.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/documentation.wml	2007-10-23 01:20:10 UTC (rev 12124)
+++ website/trunk/en/documentation.wml	2007-10-23 01:34:52 UTC (rev 12125)
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 <li>We have a <a
 href="http://bugs.torproject.org/tor";>bugtracker</a>.
 If you have a bug, especially a crash bug, read <a
-href="http://wiki.noreply.org/wiki/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ServerCrashing";>how
+href="http://wiki.noreply.org/wiki/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#RelayCrashing";>how
 to report a Tor bug</a> first and then tell us as much information
 about it as you can in the bugtracker. (If your bug is
 with Privoxy, your browser, or some other application, please don't put

Modified: website/trunk/en/index.wml
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/en/index.wml	2007-10-23 01:20:10 UTC (rev 12124)
+++ website/trunk/en/index.wml	2007-10-23 01:34:52 UTC (rev 12125)
@@ -29,7 +29,8 @@
 surveillance that threatens personal freedom and privacy, confidential
 business activities and relationships, and state security.  Tor
 protects you by encrypting your communications and bouncing them
-around a distributed network of servers.  Tor works with many of your
+around a distributed network of relays run by volunteers
+all around the world. Tor works with many of your
 existing applications, including web browsers, instant messaging
 clients, remote login, and other applications based on the Internet's
 TCP protocol.
@@ -60,14 +61,12 @@
 strong anonymity.)
 </p>
 
-
 <p>
-Tor works by bouncing your traffic around a set of relays run by
-volunteers all around the world. Tor's security improves as its user
+Tor's security improves as its user
 base grows and as more people volunteer to
 <a href="<page docs/tor-doc-relay>">run relays</a>. (It isn't
 nearly as hard to set up as you might think, and can significantly
-<a href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#ServerAnonymity";>
+<a href="http://wiki.noreply.org/noreply/TheOnionRouter/TorFAQ#RelayAnonymity";>
 enhance your own security against some attacks</a>.)
 If running a relay isn't for you, we need
 <a href="<page volunteer>">help with many other aspects of the project</a>,