Re: [school-discuss] Proposal for Schoolforge

["Mark Rauterkus" <Mark@Rauterkus.com>]

Hi,

Good stuff, David, but a tip: It seems too heavy on tech-speak. Do try to
get simple terms or else explain these terms in the first instance. A press
release needs to be understood by all.

LUGS
FLOSC
FLOSS
EDU
FLOSS-oriented groups


The Goals section needs more crafting for the press.
> Groups be formed:
>
>    1. maintaining, translating, writing and-or updating documents for the
> educational community's members
>    2. maintaining, creating, translating and updating FLOSS/EDU software
>    3. maintaining, creating translating and updating FLOSC (content)/EDU
>    4. introducing people in education and software development to all of the
> above and to each other.

Case in point: to maintain, does that not mean to also translate, write,
and-or update? Just use "develop."
Rather than "educational community's members" -- how about for schools, or
for the educational sectors.


Ta.


Mark Rauterkus
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