Thanks, Mark. I think I'm a long way from publishing, though. Any
comments, from
anyone, re ideas?
David
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Quoting Mark Rauterkus <Mark@Rauterkus.com>:
Hi,
Good stuff, David, but a tip: It seems too heavy on tech-speak. Do
try to
get simple terms or else explain these terms in the first instance. A
press
release needs to be understood by all.
LUGS
FLOSC
FLOSS
EDU
FLOSS-oriented groups
The Goals section needs more crafting for the press.
Groups be formed:
1. maintaining, translating, writing and-or updating documents
for the
educational community's members
2. maintaining, creating, translating and updating FLOSS/EDU
software
3. maintaining, creating translating and updating FLOSC
(content)/EDU
4. introducing people in education and software development to
all of
the
above and to each other.
Case in point: to maintain, does that not mean to also translate,
write,
and-or update? Just use "develop."
Rather than "educational community's members" -- how about for
schools, or
for the educational sectors.
Ta.
Mark Rauterkus
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