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[vidalia-svn] r2540: Form some awkward sentences by replacing "Tor" with "the Tor (website/trunk)
Author: edmanm
Date: 2008-04-26 13:50:47 -0400 (Sat, 26 Apr 2008)
New Revision: 2540
Modified:
website/trunk/download.php
website/trunk/index.php
website/trunk/screenshots.php
Log:
Form some awkward sentences by replacing "Tor" with "the Tor software" on the website.
Modified: website/trunk/download.php
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/download.php 2008-04-25 19:25:31 UTC (rev 2539)
+++ website/trunk/download.php 2008-04-26 17:50:47 UTC (rev 2540)
@@ -17,8 +17,9 @@
</p>
<p>
-<i>Note:</i> Vidalia requires Tor 0.1.2.x or later. If you're installing
-the Windows or Mac OS X bundle, then the latest version of Tor is already included.
+<i>Note:</i> Vidalia requires version 0.1.2.x or later of the Tor software. If
+you're installing the Windows or Mac OS X bundle, then the latest version of
+the Tor software is already included.
</p>
<h3>Latest Vidalia Release (24-March-2008): <b>0.1.2</b>
@@ -28,7 +29,7 @@
<td colspan="3">
<b>Stable Bundles</b><br/>
Includes
- <a href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor</a>
+ the <a href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor</a> software
<a href="dist/other/tor-0.1.2.19.tar.gz">0.1.2.19</a>
(<a href="dist/other/tor-0.1.2.19.tar.gz.asc">sig</a>) and
<a href="http://www.privoxy.org/";>Privoxy</a>
@@ -76,7 +77,7 @@
<td colspan="3">
<b>Development Bundles</b><br/>
Includes
- <a href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor</a>
+ the <a href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor</a> software
<a href="dist/other/tor-0.2.0.23-rc.tar.gz">0.2.0.23-rc</a>
(<a href="dist/other/tor-0.2.0.23-rc.tar.gz.asc">sig</a>) and
<a href="http://www.privoxy.org/";>Privoxy</a>
Modified: website/trunk/index.php
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/index.php 2008-04-25 19:25:31 UTC (rev 2539)
+++ website/trunk/index.php 2008-04-26 17:50:47 UTC (rev 2540)
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
<div class="content">
<p>
Vidalia is a cross-platform controller GUI for
-<a href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor</a>, built using the
+the <a href="https://www.torproject.org/";>Tor</a> software, built using the
<a href="http://trolltech.com/products/qt";>Qt</a>
-framework. Using Vidalia, you can start and stop Tor, view the status of Tor at
-a glance, and monitor Tor's bandwidth usage. Vidalia also makes it easy to
-contribute to the Tor network by helping you set up and manage your own Tor relay.
+framework. Using Vidalia, you can start and stop the Tor software, view its
+status at a glance, and monitor bandwidth usage. Vidalia also makes it easy to
+contribute to the Tor network by helping you set up and manage your own relay.
</p>
<p>
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
<li><b>24-March-2008:</b>
Vidalia 0.1.2 is <a href="download.php">released</a>. This release fixes a significant
bug in the 0.1.x series that prevented Vidalia clients from displaying Tor relays and
- circuits in the network map. See the
+ circuits in the network map. See the
<a href="http://trac.vidalia-project.net/browser/vidalia/tags/vidalia-0.1.2/CHANGELOG";>
changelog</a> for a complete list of other changes in this release, as well as the few
changes in the short-lived 0.1.1 release.
@@ -55,9 +55,9 @@
</li>
<li><b>24-October-2007:</b>
Vidalia 0.0.15 is released. This release adds support
- for Tor's HTTP/HTTPS proxy and "fascist firewall" options. Vidalia now also supports
+ for the Tor software's HTTP/HTTPS proxy and "fascist firewall" options. Vidalia now also supports
Tor's bridge relay features for those who are blocked from reaching the Tor network,
- or who want to set up their own bridge relay to help censored Tor users. See the
+ or who want to set up their own bridge relay to help censored users. See the
<a href="http://trac.vidalia-project.net/browser/vidalia/tags/vidalia-0.0.15/CHANGELOG";>
changelog</a> for a list of the many other improvements and bugfixes in this release.
</li>
Modified: website/trunk/screenshots.php
===================================================================
--- website/trunk/screenshots.php 2008-04-25 19:25:31 UTC (rev 2539)
+++ website/trunk/screenshots.php 2008-04-26 17:50:47 UTC (rev 2540)
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
<div class="content">
<p>
The screenshots below should give you an idea of how Vidalia can help you
-manage Tor. Click on the thumbnails to see a full-size image.
+manage the Tor software. Click on the thumbnails to see a full-size image.
</p>
<p>
If you have some ideas you'd like to see implemented in Vidalia or
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
</p>
-<h3>Displays Status of Tor</h3>
+<h3>Displays Status of the Tor software</h3>
<table>
<tr>
<td align="center"><i>Windows</i></td>
@@ -42,12 +42,12 @@
<p>
Vidalia runs in your system's notification area, changing its icon to indicate
-the status of Tor. You will know at a glance if Tor is working or not without
-taking up a lot of screen real estate.
+the status of the Tor software. You will know at a glance if the Tor software
+is working or not without taking up a lot of screen real estate.
</p>
-<h3>View Tor Messages</h3>
+<h3>View Log Messages</h3>
<table>
<tr>
<td align="center"><i>Windows</i></td>
@@ -67,12 +67,12 @@
<p>
The message log displays informational messages that Vidalia gets from
-Tor. You can select which types of messages you'd like to see, have them
-automatically logged to a file, or search through your message log for
-specific messages.
+the Tor software. You can select which types of messages you'd like to
+see, have them automatically logged to a file, or search through your
+message log for specific messages.
</p>
-<h3>Tor Network Map</h3>
+<h3>Map of the Tor Network</h3>
<table>
<tr>
<td align="center"><i>Windows</i></td>
@@ -93,10 +93,10 @@
</table>
<p>
-Vidalia shows you a map of the Tor network, plotting points for each Tor router
+Vidalia shows you a map of the Tor network, plotting points for each relay
and drawing the path of your circuits through the network. You can also view
-details about routers, including their bandwidth and uptime, as well as
-monitor the status of your application connections through Tor.
+details about relays, including their bandwidth and uptime, as well as
+monitor the status of your application connections through the Tor network.
</p>
<h3>Monitor Bandwidth Usage</h3>
@@ -152,15 +152,15 @@
</table>
<p>
-The configuration dialog allows you to configure aspects and behaviors of both Vidalia
-and Tor.
+The configuration dialog allows you to configure aspects and behaviors of both
+Vidalia and the Tor software.
</p>
<p>
The Tor network is made up of
<a href="http://tor.eff.org/volunteer.html.en";>volunteers</a> all over the world
-who care about Internet privacy. Vidalia helps you contribute to Tor by making
-it easy to set up and configure a Tor relay.
+who care about Internet privacy. Vidalia helps you contribute to the Tor network
+by making it easy to set up and configure a relay.
</p>
<h3>Get Help</h3>