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Re: RFR (Request For Review ;)
Christian Reiniger wrote:
> Hi all, I reorganized the "How to Start" docs a bit (most notably merged
> the website/mailinglist ones into one) and added some stuff. Please have a
> look at it (I'm sure there are at least some weird expression errors in
> it ;)
Ehm, yeah :)
Below is a really bad case of nitpicking, dunno if it helps ;)
> If you have your own big server [...] including a tape streamer of at least
the same size
same size of what ? probably the hdisk, but there's no mention of it.
> There are quite some organizations provide free projects
either "that provide" or "providing"
> Go for simply, classic, readable and not for high-tech state of the art.
should be "simple" not "simply", but I'd write "readable style and" instead
> of you keep the "old news
"if" instead of "of"
> Also, it will allow your project team to remind all the brilliant conceptial
> without having to scroll back through mailinglist archives.
sounds a bit funny. Either you mean "to be reminded of" or "remember", no ?
also it's "conceptual" not "conceptial"
> An HOWTO-Compile document
> people new to the list can retrieve the mails of the past some days
"of the past few days" sounds better
> A less common service (offered for example by SunSITE Denmark is the
forgot a ")" here. also maybe "as A newsgroup" (further down the line)
> explaining ahet CVS is
"what" I guess :)
And ehm did I miss the project management tips ? If they're mixed in with the
regular text, perhaps a "TIP" icon would be nice ? :)