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Re: [seul-edu] Third draft of letter of invitation



David Bucknell wrote:

> Thoughts about the letter.
>
> "We at SEUL/edu have noticed your
> > > efforts to further the use of Linux, free software in general, and
> > > other free resources in education.
>
> As you say you're writing on behalf of Schoolforge, I suggest you not say
> "We at
> SEUL/edu," but simply "we."  I think you should leave seul-edu for you
> signature in this case.
>

Agreed.

>
> "and other free resources in education" should probably be "or
> other ..." in order to be inclusive of both software and content.
>
> I think that the solution to the problem with free software vs open source
> is to say both (free and open source); moreover, in the case of
> schoolforge, emphasis on Linux is probably misplaced. It may be the most
> important player, but it is only one.

I'll add open source.

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